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Feedback from unnsucsessful recruitments

Post  Lower Land on Sun Aug 09, 2009 1:03 pm

I got feedback today from a nation I unsucsessfuly tried to recruit. Here is what said nation said:

no. and also your recruitment message is unoriginal and too long. (tellin it straight)

So I replied saying that I didnt understand why they thought is was unorignal or something to that effect and the nation responded:

too long and confusing. If you want people to join your region, then make it more appealing and friendly. ;-)

This was the telegram Aidsboat came up with. Responses anyone?

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Post  Aidsboat Nation on Sun Aug 09, 2009 1:06 pm

I think just one person's opinion shouldn't change our recruitment strategy. We are growing at a great rate, and I think we should stick with it.

What do the recently-recruited members think?
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Post  Lower Land on Sun Aug 09, 2009 1:09 pm

Well I think they may have liked it seeing as how they came. But I do think we could find a way to shorten it a little, not too much though because I agree with this nation. I also think that we can have a little message at the end asking them for thier feedback if they do not join the region.

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Post  Guest on Sun Aug 09, 2009 2:15 pm

I joined because I was addressed as highly esteemed leader. I felt flattered.

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Post  Meadowdale on Sun Aug 09, 2009 2:41 pm

Well the message is sorta long I suppose, but frankly if the people we're recruiting don't have the interest to read just one long paragraph, do we want them here?

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Post  Lower Land on Sun Aug 09, 2009 3:39 pm

Well, I see what you mean, but Meadowdale, as Minister of Diplomatic Affairs, I would like to call apon you to try to make a slightly more appealing recruitment telegram. I understand that what you are tring to say, but a revision in our recruitment could lead to a larger growth in our region.

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Post  Meadowdale on Sun Aug 09, 2009 9:00 pm

I'll look into it.

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Post  Lower Land on Sun Aug 09, 2009 9:06 pm

I also got feedback from a nation telling me good job on copying La Mafia's telegram.

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Post  Meadowdale on Sun Aug 09, 2009 9:16 pm

Aidsboat made that haha. Well I'll look into changing it up.

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Post  Aidsboat Nation on Mon Aug 10, 2009 9:34 am

I synthesized the message from La Mafia's (I guess?), ours, and one other one.

It's not the same, and it has much more of a Free Society Vibe, but it is lengthy.
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